A piece that demonstrates my skills at revision and re-seeing my work would be the Tradition paper. I choose this paper because I thought I had written the paper better than I actually had. Also throughout other assignments I have slowly learned what each paper really is asking for and although you may not agree that this is what the assignment is asking for this is the best way I can identify the assignment. Strength in the paper was the different thoughts I had put into the paper, but I needed re-write the thesis so my thoughts made sense with the thesis and followed along.